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Stupid poem
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 07:38:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I'm in the mood for something sweet
Do you have anything I can chew on
Anything I can eat?
Anything satisfying
Anything other than your smelly feet
Something I can hold on to
Something messy
Something wet
Anything but neat
Organized
Your thoughts are so logical
Your reasoning
Everything methodical
Your intuition
Guiding your decisions
Your heart
Harboring your inhibitions
Your soul guarding our indiscretions
My words falling on deaf ears of resistance
So take my love
Throw it away
Take our memories
Let them waste in the fray
Take my tears
And wash the decay
Take my sorrow
I hope it makes your day
I feel it now
Like never before
I open now
The forbidden door
A decade later
I am right back where I was before
Making love to these words
Rather than living a life one can adore
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Re: Stupid poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 01:25:38 PM AEST
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Now, now; you should know by now not to title one of your gems with words like "Stupid". It is like a giant sign that screams; "Masterpiece over here, yoo-hoo!" You really conveyed your message well with this emotive piece. There is a feeling of being unfulfilled here. Great expression.
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