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Neverlasting
Contributed by
Jyssvw
on
Tuesday, 16th April 2013 @ 06:44:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Confusion sets in
Reality hits me hard
No longer am I allowed in
Locked out of her heart
Daydreaming now
Of times once spent
Always had a feeling
It would someday end like this
Courage is elusive
All I have are tears
Mourning all the memories
Counting all the years
Piling on my burden
Are indescribable fears
So sure was she
It was all planed before I arrived
A knife to my heart
A blow to my soul
I'm surprised I actually survived
Days will turn to months
Seasons will pass in time
Always thought I would marry her
Hard to accept
She is no longer mine
A lesson leaned
Love is not deaf
Nor is it blind
Copyright ©
Jyssvw
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2013-04-16 06:44:11]
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Re: Neverlasting
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 16th April 2013 @ 01:14:30 PM AEST
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| Your words carry such power that it crosses over into other points where love is abused and set aside. It carries the pain from within and the hope that never will fail. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Neverlasting
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by CharM on
Saturday, 20th April 2013 @ 11:13:42 AM AEST
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| Very well written... I think a lot of people can relate to it. |
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Re: Neverlasting
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by bryantjunior on
Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 10:41:35 AM AEST
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| strong, strong words, continue writing and your emotion will flow out, you can go far |
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Re: Neverlasting
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Thursday, 25th April 2013 @ 10:49:03 AM AEST
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| :) |
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Re: Neverlasting
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by JimKoz on
Monday, 23rd December 2013 @ 09:13:49 PM AEST
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| Wow. I felt what you were describing in every line. Incredibly relatable to say the least. |
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