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It'll Be OK, But Why?
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 12:22:23 PM in AEST
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My mind questions, why does a body hurt
My heart questions, why does the soul cry
With each strike, only one question I blurt
You're telling me that it'll be ok, but why
Each day, looking for a mystical happy place
Each hour, seeking to find some quiet peace
Each minute, asking why I'm still in this race
Each second, the chances of success decrease
All around, your words resound - it'l be ok
Yet you've no road map to lead the way there
I hear each syllable, each letter in what you say
But in my recesses, my being screams beware
Craziness becomes apparent within a moment
Hate forces entry with each beat of a dying heart
Promises made, hold on, the answer will be sent
Knowledge that to hear, belief must become a part
In my world, knowing and believing often disagree
I still don't understand why you say it'll be ok
Your eyes show me the truth you need me to see
It'll be ok because life and love will lead the way
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Re: It'll Be OK, But Why?
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 08:26:32 PM AEST
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Very good work, friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: It'll Be OK, But Why?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 08:50:34 PM AEST
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So sad but love the way you write. You seem to write with such ease.
Life and love will ultimately lead the way...yes.
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Re: It'll Be OK, But Why?
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 03:21:06 AM AEST
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| fear can destroy happiness if you let it. That is the message i got out of this poem. Let life and love lead the way. :) wonderful. |
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