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LANE OF LOVE
Contributed by
karu
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Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 11:51:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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life is moving on train of love,
in search of rain of love,
when she came in life,
it was a gain of love ,
but now i am alone,
so i know the pain of love,
even in this condition i am not so sad,
since life is a chain of love,
and so much love is still left in lane of love
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karu
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2013-04-26 11:51:27]
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Re: LANE OF LOVE
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 26th April 2013 @ 03:42:02 PM AEST
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| Love comes at us from so many angles as your words convey. I like how you take the reader from love discovered to lost to understood. Very nice write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: LANE OF LOVE
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by CharM on
Sunday, 28th April 2013 @ 12:19:09 PM AEST
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| I agree with the first comment... you were able to how love is found, captured, lost still have to hope to find love again. I also like how you kept it simple and true that any reader can relate to. |
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Re: LANE OF LOVE
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 31st July 2015 @ 05:36:35 PM AEST
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| So true. Nice poem! |
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