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Into Ruins
Contributed by
raspberry89
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Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 02:55:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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How can I define to you in a rhyme
My pain, melodically, acquired with time
How can I make anyone feel what I feel
When all I know are lies, how can I make this real
Let me bring you down with me
As we walk through the fires, tell me what you see
Let me throw you to the loins blindfolded
Stand your ground and see how long you can hold it
Give me 18 years to destroy your worth
Ill be in your brain til you regret your birth
Let me sully all that surrounds you
You'll thank God for the worst you've been through
Only when you have to hide like I hid
Will you know pain like I did
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raspberry89
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2013-04-30 02:55:46]
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Re: Into Ruins
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 05:25:02 AM AEST
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| Sounds like a dark mind and soul. If only there were more to the narrator, a glimpse of who they are, a bit of insight as to what that pain were and is, and last but not least, how, why, where, and from what they hid. |
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Re: Into Ruins
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by Helenesovig on
Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 10:57:28 AM AEST
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| That was really beautiful, it really fell in my taste :) |
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