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Contributed by
Helenesovig
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Monday, 6th May 2013 @ 09:20:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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This isn't a suicide letter,
It isn't a cry for attention,
I am not a burning feather,
I just dont belong in this dimension,
I am not weak by spirit or heart,
But I was cursed right from the start,
I am but crippled by my faith,
When she left.. well enough is said,
But I thought I was cool,
I thought it was clear,
But I had not cried my last tear,
You left me alone,
You left me in fear,
And I cant go on without you here,
It is not fear!!
My whole life,
I lived without you,
My whole life I've been untrue,
To my emotions and my loss,
And all they say is youre the course,
If I cry its you they blame,
But I wouldn't believe it,
I was ashamed,
They say Im like you,
And I want to believe,
But now Im thinking,
Were you too this weak?
I believe you were strong,
I believe you were kind,
I hope you can see me,
Cause youre on my mind.
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Helenesovig
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2013-05-06 09:20:29]
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Re: You
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by asschinann on
Monday, 6th May 2013 @ 10:23:38 AM AEST
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| I really liked this. I feel you really capture the reader in the essence of where you're coming from. |
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Re: You
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by CharM on
Monday, 6th May 2013 @ 06:08:16 PM AEST
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| I agree. You can really feel the anger and frustration as you keep reading... |
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