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The Voices Started
Contributed by
tammyrobbins
on
Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 05:08:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Watching keen eyes No word from lips Observing the world Little notice or acknowledgement As the grasp slips
Blue burst into black Light overcome now dark The perimeter grows smaller and smaller As the voices start
Living deprived of joy An artificial life soon erased Fleeing to madness dimension Refusing to bear the pain Of conscious existence
Offered as sacrifice To the altar of insanity My mind With no resistance Soul and heart parted When the voices started
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Re: The Voices Started
(User Rating: 1 ) by davemus on
Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 08:02:31 PM AEST (User
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This gave me a chill. Powerful writing. Dark but stirring |
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Re: The Voices Started
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 09:50:20 PM AEST (User
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love this flow.... |
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Re: The Voices Started
(User Rating: 1 ) by thezenmonkey on
Saturday, 11th May 2013 @ 07:28:44 AM AEST (User
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Seriously evocative! |
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