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A Time to Answer
Contributed by
davemus
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Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 02:22:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The innocence of early years
That gave us immortality
Too quickly faded and became
The hollow triumph of the game
And through our tears toward our fears
It led us to our destiny
We ran to pleasures of the flesh
With recklessness and lack of thought
And didnt pause to realize
The headlong rush, the vacant eyes
Would soon destroy this fleeting joy
And bring regret for what wed wrought
So now its late the hour has come
To analyze true souls laid bare
Our egos must be put away
So honesty can claim the day
Its very clear, the questions here
Are: Did we love? and Did we care?
Copyright ©
davemus
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2013-05-13 02:22:17]
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Re: A Time to Answer
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by Archie on
Monday, 13th May 2013 @ 03:02:21 PM AEST
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| I like this, the rhythim was a bit wierd for me but evrything still held together. It actually reminded me of one of my poems "When I grow up" You are a talented writer. |
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Re: A Time to Answer
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by stevenfloyd on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 02:06:53 PM AEST
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| well this is something i can relate to very much. and oddly something that i never have written about. good write. |
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