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Human Nature
Contributed by
ScribereHabeo
on
Tuesday, 14th May 2013 @ 04:53:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Things happen that make you feel emotion
Our current world order borders on the brink of revolution
People die every day just trying to eat
People die and they hope for a god to meet
Despair is only met by hate
We have bombs that can obliterate
Kids lose their parents every day
We are trying to keep evlolution at bay
Keeping our minds warped by society
Hidden from Human nature, in reality
Destruction is met by beautiful things
Happines flourishes, and so do good hapennings
We live in a complex place
We are making it, at a slow pace
we dont yet know the future
But hey its only human nature
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ScribereHabeo
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2013-05-14 16:53:22]
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Re: Human Nature
(User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on
Thursday, 16th May 2013 @ 12:12:45 PM AEST
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| I loved the way you took the reader on a roller coaster ride, and then make the end a soft landing. This is great and contains so many truths, yet you let the reader picture their own world, with the ending of positivity. Great write - I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing, P |
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