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Suisong
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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hell's own breath
a bitter mist of suicidal fire
eclipsed my world
proving you a liar
"always and forever"
these words you spoke
with no thought given to the end
now i'm left alone
weeping over your stone
i can't be alone again
devoting all my life
getting to know the knife
that you used to part the wall of death
these scars won't have time to heal
as long as i'm able to feel
my cancerous lungs devouring another breath
in the night, no rest
i envision your breast
heaving madly as you slipped away
how your wrists bled
like the tears i shed
red flowing freely, inviting grey
no sleep, no hope
no time for razor or rope
this gun must be the quickest way to die
can't linger without you
my life is through
Nothing Left, no reason to try
i feel no fear, i feel no pain
when the bullet tears through my brain
and sweet Oblivion slips into view
they'll think me weak, but i don't care
i would rather be anywhere
than living my life without you
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Cancer
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2003-05-15 14:35:00]
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Re: Suisong
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 05:06:39 PM AEST
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| this si absolutely amazing...you write such awesome poetry... |
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Re: Suisong
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 01:03:17 PM AEST
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| this is another one of your best in my opinion. i love the dark imagery and powerful language you use. sad content but beautifully expressed. keep writing, Kate x |
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