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Goodbye
Contributed by
Jayybabyy2
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Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 01:24:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Mind blowing.
Earth shattering.
Life alternating.
Where it all starts, it starts to fall.
Broken promises.
Small whispers.
Kept secrets.
Goodbyes.
Heart break.
Depression.
Regret.
Goodbyes.
Youre gone.
I miss you.
I love you.
Goodbye..
Copyright ©
Jayybabyy2
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2013-05-21 01:24:14]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 09:48:37 AM AEST
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| I was not sure if this was about the death of a lover or a parting of ways. I like it in either case. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by stevenfloyd on
Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 04:59:32 PM AEST
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| you couldnt put it in any less words. well done |
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Re: Goodbye
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 11:45:53 PM AEST
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this is sooo heartbreaking.. yo ucan feel the pain its soo to the point and so in your face.. its amazing.. sorry for the heartbreak but this is a masterpiece of pain
Jennittude
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