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Satan's Angel
Contributed by
stevenfloyd
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Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 02:19:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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" Satan's Angel"
I had once loved an Angel,
Who on me cast her spell.
But yet like in a wolf in sheeps clothing,
She had come straight up from hell.
She had said that she loved me.
And would do me no wrong.
But then she stripped the life from me,
And now she is gone
. She is Satans angel,
And she is still out there some where
I know she is preying on another,
So you had better beware
She is a very deadly lady,
Who posseses a Hypnotic style
She can take a mans life,
With just one little smile
. She prey's on mans emotion's,
And to his knee's puts him down.
She will drain the life from him.
Then put him six feet in the ground
. She is a Demon, a Vampire,
With a lethal first bite.
She is a lady of darkness,
Who stalks her men in the night
Have you met up with my Angel?
The daughter of Satan himself.
She is a cold heartless Woman.
Who only lives for herself.
You will know in a minute,
Who this ***** in black is.
See no matter how hard you try.
This Woman no man can resist.
But i will search for her alway's.
That is all I have got to live for.
Someday I am sure I will find her,
So I may even the score.
Lord I know you will forgive me.
And help me see this thing through.
It is for the sake of man kind.
It is something you know I must do.
And though I still love her.
And I am still under her spell.
I will find this Satan's Angel.
And send her straight back to HELL!
Written by Steven Floyd
Copyright ©
stevenfloyd
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2013-05-22 14:19:40]
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Re: Satan's Angel
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 04:50:27 PM AEST
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| There lurks so many such angels. You must be strong in yourself - know when the right love walks toward you. Your write sets the stage for the reality of life. Very nice write - life at its worst and best. Thank you for sharing, P. |
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Re: Satan's Angel
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by Sommer on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 12:59:13 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love this!! Great read. |
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Re: Satan's Angel
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by Helenesovig on
Friday, 24th May 2013 @ 04:39:49 PM AEST
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Terrible... no I´m kidding, its great! very personal the way it tells a story and jet connects with so many feelings at the same time.
Great writing! |
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Re: Satan's Angel
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by Waynster on
Saturday, 22nd June 2013 @ 10:26:31 AM AEST
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Steve,
I know exactly how you feel. When I read this, i could feel it as if it where me experiencing those moments in life with this woman. Your words flowed perfectly until the stanza with the asterisks, that threw it off, but all in all, this is an awesome poem! Sincerely awesome write!!!
Wayne |
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Re: Satan's Angel
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by Archie on
Sunday, 6th September 2015 @ 08:07:22 PM AEST
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I can relate to this, but I know deep down evil cannot be defeated with its own weapons.
You have here a pretty good write |
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