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Sometimes
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 06:26:55 AM in AEST
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Questions are answered
With questions alone
I quess sometimes answers
Are better unknown
During a black out
When all clocks are off
Isn't it funny how
Time seems to stop
When unstable foundations
Are tormented with quakes
They endure only so much
Before they tire and brake
When neck deep in quicksand
Though help is about
Sometimes falling deeper
Is the only way out
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Re: Sometimes
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 05:41:21 PM AEST
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Oh I love this! And it makes so much sense to me! Great write!
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Re: Sometimes
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 05:53:37 PM AEST
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| thanx gin... sweet as ever =) |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Chrissie on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 07:59:40 AM AEST
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Excellent!
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Re: Sometimes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 05:51:53 AM AEST
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I'm glad you decided to post this now.. it's lovely...
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Re: Sometimes
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by Sweetie on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 06:07:49 AM AEST
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| Even though you were so young you still had a wonderful way of writing. This is very lovely! love Sweetie |
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Re: Sometimes
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by tinka_belle on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 04:01:49 AM AEST
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i love this
its so good
interesting
confusing yet so easy to understand
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