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A seed that could not grow
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 6th June 2013 @ 08:33:47 PM in AEST
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I am afraid that the words cannot rise in me
My heart is full of love
More than it has been in many years
I was a seed that could not grow
A star that could not shine
I have wriggled and fought
Burned cold and alone
To break free of the soil
To shine down from the sky
The words will not sing for me
My heart has found the water of my soul
The dusk of another day
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Re: A seed that could not grow
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 6th June 2013 @ 11:57:38 PM AEST
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An odd image and representation to me.
The last stanza is my favorite, if it's in the sense of your heart being a seed like yourself.
What I see in this, is just about anything, is in itself much like a seed. Your voice, lies in your chest, waiting to sprout, and grow into a beautiful tree of expression. You have been a seed yourself, going throughout life, not yet nurtured with joy and peace, your shell taking all kinds of punishment, and yet you remain intact. Someday, that seed will sprout, and every facet of life will have its own new take, or perception. |
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Re: A seed that could not grow
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 7th June 2013 @ 03:32:10 AM AEST
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| Life is always a little rough around the edges, but beautiful nonetheless. :) I liked this one. |
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Re: A seed that could not grow
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by karu on
Friday, 7th June 2013 @ 12:58:43 PM AEST
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God bless u
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Re: A seed that could not grow
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 7th June 2013 @ 07:09:48 PM AEST
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that is very deep and have a few levels and it seems to convey a few different messeges but its pretty deep.. well written
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: A seed that could not grow
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 01:01:55 AM AEST
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this poem is beyond beautiful, i love your use of
language here, the style, flow and grace are so
soft yet so powerful.....
hugs n' love nessa
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