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Steady Fall
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Thursday, 13th June 2013 @ 08:31:25 PM in AEST
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Thunder outside my window
Sunshine at my door
A love tries to break in
After it broke out once before
Flames encroach my garden
My white picket fence burned
The stone paved road
Led to my security
Littered with ash
Black soot claims the patterns
Clouds eager to consume
Angels that dwell in the cocoon
Heavenly body
Waits for the time
To pounce on opportunity
Where the luck ran out
Preparations for dinner
A thaw is in progress
Frozen hearts
Beaten minds
Climb from the abyss
Enter a stream of consciousness
Take what is given
Not a penny more
Thoughts withhold secrets of the soul
Speak until your words are no more
Silence claims
Your given name
Steals back your small part of the world
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jyssvw
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2013-06-13 20:31:25]
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Re: Steady Fall
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th June 2013 @ 10:38:30 PM AEST
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Great work of art.
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Re: Steady Fall
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 06:15:11 AM AEST
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Good very Good. We fall and yet we must get up. Like this one.
Greetings
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Re: Steady Fall
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 07:28:03 PM AEST
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another well written poem from you
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Steady Fall
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 08:17:49 PM AEST
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Fantastic. Some great lines in this. Hard to pick a favourite, but wonderfully thought-provoking. I have to read this again. Well done!
~Scorp
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