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Contributed by
cathartic
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Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 12:35:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I measure the breaths you take by the beating of my heart
I am always in love with you
You have died many deaths
But you breath in the wind I provide with the reassurance of a resuscitated life
I am always in love with you
We beat the odds
We break molds with our bear hands and wrestle our souls away from erogenous hands
We build castles out of memories and tuck our hopes behind the stars
Everything we are is written in the sky
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2013-06-14 00:35:37]
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Re: ....
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 01:08:51 AM AEST
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,very powerful vibes..
It certainly brings inspiration to all that our fortunate enuff to read it.
It's just like fresh air when you think there want be any more. It's magic, very refreshing, powerful and it speaks to ones heart and soul and brings life to a weary pilgrim.
Luv it and luv u for sharing it.
Big huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy
I feel so helpless 'cause I could never bring it justice.
Very touching.
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Re: ....
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 05:52:47 AM AEST
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I second that! Very good poem. Love reading it.
Greetings
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Re: ....
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th June 2013 @ 10:58:10 PM AEST
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energy and magic within this verse, its a flowing and delightful poem,nice work.
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Re: ....
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 24th August 2013 @ 02:35:59 PM AEST
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Nice flow to this, particularly the last two lines which I felt tied it all together well.
"We build castles out of memories and tuck our hopes behind the stars"
is a line I would be proud of.
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