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The Immortal Herald
Contributed by
Wordsmith123
on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 01:38:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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A journey all too suddenly began:
My fare paid, and fate thus sealed.
Water, smooth and chill, skirts the craft.
I cast my gaze behind in mournful longing.
Despite my pleas, we cannot turn back;
It is too late.
Ahead, the horizon is swallowed,
Dipped in bloody red and plastered to the sky.
Again I cry to the soulless captain of my vessel;
I am met with deafening nothingness.
A path by countless legions tread before,
And yet I stand alone in this endeavor.
At venture's end, guided by the bony
Claw of the Immortal Herald,
Pointing into eternity,
I march to embrace destiny.
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Wordsmith123
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Re: The Immortal Herald
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by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 02:29:07 AM AEST
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Yes ones destiny is laid out before you and all you can do is march on. Good write. Thanks for sharing.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: The Immortal Herald
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by flavellm on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 07:32:41 AM AEST
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| this is a jaw dropper!!. I sensed a bit of baudelaire in this. top top write kid |
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Re: The Immortal Herald
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by GloomyBlu on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 08:28:40 AM AEST
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| feeling of hopelessness was definitely evoked. good work. |
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Re: The Immortal Herald
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 20th October 2013 @ 04:12:21 PM AEST
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| what can i say except, stunning write, love itxxx |
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Re: The Immortal Herald
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 06:55:21 PM AEST
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exciting adventure within', beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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