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Hush
Contributed by
shelby
on
Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 01:06:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's minutes like these,
a moment trapped in time.
A memory,soft,divine
then in the wind its gone.
It's minutes like these,
for a moment I thought...
thought I heard your whisper
in the tree's.
It was just the wind I guess
but still for a moment
a lovely sentiment
that maybe you are still nearby
still around, then I sigh
The storm is blowing in
raindrops coming with the wind
but for now the sun wont die
and she paints herself bold across the sky.
It's moments like this
I feel the stillness of the wind
brushing close across my skin
and I miss you, I miss you again.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2013-06-18 01:06:33]
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Re: Hush
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 03:23:04 AM AEST
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Hi There
Awe that's heart wrenching. The longing for someone that is gone plays with the mind. Making you believe they are still there when in fact they never will be. I feel it with my mom and dad. This is a very good write make me celebrate my parents all over again. Thanks
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Re: Hush
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 02:23:43 PM AEST
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Great write my friend made me think of Mom
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Re: Hush
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by flavellm on
Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 04:34:46 PM AEST
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| Thats damn good that, heart definitely fluttered a touch reading that. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Hush
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 12:29:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful, girlfriend.
huggs,
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Re: Hush
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 01:14:35 PM AEST
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simply amazing and heartfelt.. love it
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