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All to Be
Contributed by
rustygrl33
on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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i dont know
maybe its just me
but life is coming
coming to fastly
i dont wanna watch
dont make me lie
and just watch it all
fly and fly by
i thought you might of
might of, just loved me
couldnt think
of a reason why
but when i saw that pain
i knew it was all a lie
dont make me just sit
i cant do it
not even if you cared
that love is unprepared
should you come by
i know that i would
but i dont know why
love and pain
they are equal in life
but to you, you cant see
and i wish you could
but my wishes are nothing
nothing at all to be
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Re: All to Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 06:04:36 AM AEST (User
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Wow! Great work. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: All to Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by markrise on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 06:22:51 AM AEST (User
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I love your style, its really paced and beautiful. Stream of conciousness is so good. Thanks for sharing. :O) |
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