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waging a war within
Contributed by
phantomvampyress
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Friday, 5th July 2013 @ 05:41:56 PM in AEST
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fighting your demns as you lay idle
not knowing how much deep down for me you really care
coming through the battle scattered and torn
it was for you I fought
yet you who lost the waging war
corridors of choices crossing the path
lighting up the way
hope you chose wise
there are no back tracking on my road
make sure the chosen is the one written in stone
Vampyress Jenni
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Re: waging a war within
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by shelby on
Saturday, 6th July 2013 @ 12:40:09 AM AEST
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Dark and deeply moving is my Jen ok??
Pm me k.
Love ya
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Michelle |
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Re: waging a war within
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th July 2013 @ 12:19:04 AM AEST
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Very dark.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: waging a war within
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 07:33:33 PM AEST
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sad but so heartfelt!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: waging a war within
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 10:13:30 AM AEST
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Well hello Miss Jennitude! ;)
I can completely relate to this piece! You are right, it is best to keep looking forward on your path through life. When looking back we lose sight of what is before us, missing opportunities and the chance to grow. We cannot live for others if we aren't prepared to live for ourselves. Keep positive, and keep waging that war, and know you are on the right path!
Great job expressing yourself.
~Scorp |
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Re: waging a war within
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by wheels on
Friday, 24th June 2016 @ 10:54:49 PM AEST
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| Good as always (from an old friend - been along time - thanks) |
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