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Tear Dust
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Saturday, 13th July 2013 @ 07:31:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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See the tear dust left on your face
Cringing, trying to silence the cry
Wiping doesn't remove the trace
Only tears know the reason why
Heartbreak again or soul enhanced
Did life present another dark blow
Or could it be a love chanced
Time will reveal the way this goes
Torrents flood an aching soul's quest
Tear dust is etched there ever deeper
Begging won't allow a mind to rest
As you sink upward climbing steeper
Be it so lucky that love's the star
Tear dust blends within the clear sky
Fresh laughter rings out near and far
Tears of love are the quickest to dry
Each day waves as yesterday departs
Unknown what path it will choose
Tear dust holds off as a new day starts
Toss of a coin whether win or lose
Magic lies deep creating all tear dust
The key is believing from their start
Life is tethered to our love's trust
One slight tug releases our heart
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dvtpdw
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2013-07-13 19:31:29]
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Re: Tear Dust
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by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 14th July 2013 @ 01:47:50 PM AEST
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So much truth in what you say here. Good write
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Tear Dust
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by Survivor on
Friday, 19th July 2013 @ 06:26:34 AM AEST
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| The rhyming beat was good as well as the topic. What impressed me the most is how you were able to use powerful methaphors when keeping a rhyming flow. Methaphors use is limited in rhyming poem, unlike free verse, but you found a way to express yourself well though rhyming and methaphors. |
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Re: Tear Dust
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 12:16:53 PM AEST
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i so muchly love your title, a beautiful poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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