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Words
Contributed by
shoedmj
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Sunday, 21st July 2013 @ 01:38:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If there were words to tell you
How much you mean to me,
Theyd speak of how youre brave and true;
Lovely, strong, and free.
But, there are no words to say
On land, nor sky, nor sea,
For nothing can express the love
And joy you give to me.
If there were songs to sing about
How beautiful you are,
Theyd sing about your flawless beauty
Shining like a star.
But there are no songs composed
That meet angelic par,
For beauty pales compared to you
Youre radiant by far.
If there were poems that boast about
Your talents and finesse,
Theyd brag of how you rise above
The labor and the stress.
But there are no poems to claim;
Youre skills they cant express,
For no rhymes can illustrate
The gifts that you possess.
If there were actions I could take
To show my love anew,
Theyd show you how extremely proud
And lucky I am too.
And there are actions I can take
Though some I cant undo,
But I will always hold you close
And whisper I Love You.
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Re: Words
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by dvtpdw on
Sunday, 21st July 2013 @ 03:57:48 PM AEST
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| There is so much love in your words that you transport the reader to a wonderful world. So few find what you express within your poem that the reader is thankful to just be along for the journey in your words. Very Great write. P |
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Re: Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st July 2013 @ 09:26:28 PM AEST
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I like the way you expressed that there are no poems or songs to tell her the feelings you have, yet you did it anyway.
Nicely done.
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Re: Words
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by gypsymaddness on
Sunday, 21st July 2013 @ 11:09:19 PM AEST
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| Its just heartwarming, this poem. Beautiful. |
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Re: Words
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 22nd July 2013 @ 02:40:50 AM AEST
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Hi there
1st welcome to YPDC and 2nd its awesome to see another romantic join us here LoL. Your poem, very beautiful and it shows your kind and loving heart, but it also shows what a wonderful wife you have. You see we all have the ability to love and be kind, however mankind is a strange thing we need someone to bring it out in us. From this poem I see you and your wife are very beautiful people. God bless you both and thank you for sharing. Very very good rite, reads well could well make a song of it.
Greetings
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