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Reservation for Two
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 12:05:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Coming to my senses
All hope has been lost
Giving it a second thought
I can no longer see the point
Chasing my own tail
Through circles of jokes
Face mired in dirt
Balancing on a tight rope
I wont look down
If you agree to cut the cord
I made many promises
None of them fulfilled
Changing for the sake of change
Now trying to reinvent myself
A move towards enlightenment
I aim my sights high
Pontificate on musings
I can see no light
I know not why
Darkness engulfs
Disease consumes
Nothing bubbles to the surface
Motionless,
Left with no room
A struggle, from side to side
Her child exists the womb
Mercifully, a cry is let out in stride
Life can now resume
After the shock and pain subside
Comes the birth of a new moon
Although,
Let us never assume
Make absolutely certain
For there is an infallible force
Lurking behind the velvet curtain
There is no escaping the truth
I am who I am,
and thats a damn shame
It has nothing to do with you
I am my own burden
Take for instance
A chance coincidence
With the girl I am destined to love
She won't look this way
As she eventually fades
into the summer day
The sun heats her head from above
Her voice carries with the wind
I can still hear her sing
Songs of beauty, sex and love
With humming in between
Her teeth white as cream
A voice serene
Reminds me of places I have never seen
She smiles full with happiness
Her body fit with perfect curves
Lips whisper angelic overtures
Excited,
If only I were hers
Contrived
A bit rehearsed
Inside
A table waits
Reserved
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2013-07-28 12:05:43]
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Re: Reservation for Two
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by Archie on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 02:12:32 PM AEST
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| There is a lot here to absorb. i like the sound of this from a poetic point of view. |
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Re: Reservation for Two
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th July 2013 @ 02:51:47 PM AEST
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Really good writing.
Blessings,
emy
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Re: Reservation for Two
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Monday, 29th July 2013 @ 09:41:02 AM AEST
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| I love a complicated write that isn't especially difficult to decipher. I really enjoyed this a lot. Tyfs. |
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Re: Reservation for Two
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 04:35:35 PM AEST
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A move towards enlightenment
I aim my sights high
Pontificate on musings
I can see no light
I know not why
Darkness engulfs
Disease consumes
Nothing bubbles to the surface
Motionless,
Left with no room...
Excellence. Great expression. I keep coming back to that part. I have read this before, as I tend to do with your writes. Thank you for continuously inspiring me. Your writing fuels my creativity.
...And that ending. Way to drive it in.
~Scorp |
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