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Nameless
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 31st July 2013 @ 05:23:33 PM in AEST
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Tempered enthusiasm I expect nothing much I will accept anything delivered with a soft touch Received with gratitude Like a gift from above On my knees now Praying for a little love
A blessing in disguise I give in to compromise I'm half dead Half alive My heart beats As my souls dies I gaze upwards Shooting stars fall from the night sky When the daylight arrives It's time to kiss you one last goodbye Whisper to you words I never would have dreamed you heard The first tear drops The second concurs So begins the end A foe for a friend Some one I used to know Never again You are my sin
Full disclosure Nothing has changed I am still the same A piece of garbage Without a name Throw me away My flesh is diseased I sneeze My internals bleed My sense is that you finally have what you need Me gone You appeased Me hung By neck Strangled Until death
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Re: Nameless
(User Rating: 1 ) by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 31st July 2013 @ 06:48:31 PM AEST (User
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The intensity of your words leave one breathless. I followed each word as they moved from one to another. Quite a soul tearing write - one cries for you. Great write, P |
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Re: Nameless
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 14th September 2016 @ 03:58:09 PM AEST (User
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How do you always do it? Excruciating detail. Emotive poetry packed with much pomp and circumstance.
I hope you are living the life, and doing well.
~Scorp
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