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Eye of the Storm
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
on
Sunday, 4th August 2013 @ 12:38:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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With every breath I take
I take deeply every breath
my world caves in - shakes.
My mood will remain stable
as I wait for just the time to put
my cards on the table.
Calm and I carry on
chaos around me doesn't phase me
My mind is the eye of the storm.
I pray to god and devil alike
as both do try to sway me
I listen and learn from both of their
advice.
On the surface the waters seem calm
below the river is raging
fed by the rain.
I grow colder as I grow older
the river is fed by the rain
each day in this place is a bad one
each day I grow more insane!
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thezenmonkey
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2013-08-04 12:38:57]
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Re: Eye of the Storm
(User Rating: 1 )
by Helenesovig on
Thursday, 8th August 2013 @ 11:54:19 AM AEST
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| Very nice, very sad, it really spook to me, the end was especially touching. This calm surface and chaotic core, it is so perfect for poetry, I don´t know if it is your own feelings and experiences, but it is very beautiful. |
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