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Who Am I in This?
Contributed by
northernlights
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Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 02:55:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Troubled minds
regurgitate voices, trying to bring order
to a world of wrong.
Drowning in a world of chaotic indifference.
Jostling with the grasping, as life claims its
place in the world.
Caring is neither enough nor does it bring solace,
instead the price is paid in turmoil, in failed attempts to
find peace.
Who am I in this?
Where is the voice of reason? For every scene of chaos there
is power, crushing souls to take the throne for just that meagre
second in time,and I succumb to the wakefulness of others actions
and wonder again,'Where am I in all of this?
I am in a soup of nonsense
Senseless toings and froings from one place of discomfort
to the next.
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northernlights
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2013-08-16 02:55:48]
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Re: Who Am I in This?
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 10:45:14 AM AEST
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"Drowning in a world of chaotic indifference"
Awesome line. TYFS |
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Re: Who Am I in This?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th August 2013 @ 01:15:44 AM AEST
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With a lump in his throat Timmy said, "I can seriously relate to this sad one."
Brilliantly written my dear Anna! Life seems to have a way of bringing out the poet in a poet. Those lines blow me away with their precision.
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