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Dusk
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 05:20:43 AM in AEST
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Catching dusk's fire with a glance,
i wander into sunlight's stark decadence,
softly settling into the dark horizon,
as the clouds sift like churning mist,
seething oceans of white silk,
as the colors begin to fly,
gold beams transformed to rainbows,
bathing waves in liquid sky.
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deusdeira
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2013-08-16 05:20:43]
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Re: Dusk
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by MickyTwo1984 on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 10:41:24 AM AEST
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| nice. :) TYFS |
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Re: Dusk
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by MarkMark on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 03:48:18 PM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem . I like your style and the way your words produce images in the mind of the reader. At least in the mind of this reader. Good job. |
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Re: Dusk
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 06:11:40 PM AEST
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At the end of a tough day in a long week, it was nice to read this, sigh and think
"life isn't so bad after all"
Thanks for lifting me up again!!!
Steve |
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Re: Dusk
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by Spike on
Saturday, 5th October 2013 @ 08:39:15 PM AEST
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| An absolutely luscious description of sunset. True lyrical eye candy. |
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Re: Dusk
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 08:13:19 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, sunsets are always so amazing:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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