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It Would
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
on
Wednesday, 21st August 2013 @ 07:52:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It would seem The happier you are, the more I scream Just as it would appear The more you smile, the more I fear It would seem I'm execution bound And my world just won't spin around Just as it would appear my wings are cut And I'm stuck in an ever growing rut It would seem I am falling Onto the ground and crawling And it would appear you are laughing While horns I am crafting I would seem there will be a war Cause a heavenly creature I am no more And it would appear a new home I will build With the blood of your kind on this field It would seem a crown of flame I will wear For I lost all reason to care So it would seem Your kind now scream And it would appear You are now the one in fear.
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Re: It Would
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 21st August 2013 @ 03:27:44 PM AEST (User
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It does flow well and there is a story in it. Yet the only ones that scream are the ones who won't walk in the light.
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