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The Black Rose
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Breezy
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Wednesday, 28th August 2013 @ 07:27:31 AM in AEST
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Breezy
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Re: The Black Rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th August 2013 @ 11:58:18 PM AEST
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Where he walks on painted air
That is me favorite line in this beautiful piece on yearning and desire.
Love it Ms Breezy and why would we not? Your grace bestows us.
Thank you,
Timmy |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th August 2013 @ 12:02:48 AM AEST
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| Or better to say you bestow your grace upon us mere mortals. :) |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by gypsymaddness on
Thursday, 29th August 2013 @ 11:16:13 PM AEST
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| Just beautiful. Simply . . . Beautiful. |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th August 2013 @ 01:38:57 AM AEST
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I agree with Tim, that line grabbed me too'
Blessings,
emy
Good work |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by shelby on
Monday, 16th September 2013 @ 03:22:24 AM AEST
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So happy to see a post from you.This is timeless dear lady.
Hugs
Shall |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by spud on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2013 @ 09:29:36 AM AEST
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Hi Breezy,
You know, I've never had the pleasure of
looking upon a black rose, but if I ever do
I would expect it to talk to me in lines of
pure symmetry and self-examination, not
too dissimilar to that crafted here by one
who observes - then breathes meaning to
its existence.
Where shall I place this masterpiece in a list
of masterpieces? They say the writer is only
as good as his/her last rendition. There are
exceptions - oh yes, there are exceptions.
Tommy
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Re: The Black Rose
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 27th October 2013 @ 08:55:00 AM AEST
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Some people make this poetry thing so effortless, lines dancing like a ballerina before your eyes.
You've done that here and I am awestruck.
Stunning write.
Steve |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 03:12:23 PM AEST
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From one Scorpio to another, I *love* this.
A love so loyal in nature that it towers above clouds and plunges into the depths of soul-bearing emotion. Rare, like the coveted beauty of a black rose. Something so special is not to be experienced by all. One should find themselves lucky indeed if they should stumble upon your fierce tenacity and breathtaking beauty. This write is full of your soul, and I feel privileged to catch a peek. Fantastic job, Rox.
~Scorp |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 10:34:16 PM AEST
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beautifully exquisite as ever,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Black Rose
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 10th March 2014 @ 12:25:42 AM AEST
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That was just all so beautiful! I tried to pick a favorite line, but I couldn't. The entire poems feels like a good line :)
Take care,
David |
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