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Off Your Chest
Contributed by
TheTimmy56666
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Thursday, 29th August 2013 @ 10:06:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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What is done is done
What is said is said
What is felt is felt
Things done, said, and felt
Feeling heavy on your chest
Whether it makes it better or worse
Finally lifting a curse
It's been with you all this time
Making you feel insane
To finally let it go
To finally not feel so low
It's said
It done
It's felt
And finally it's gone
Copyright ©
TheTimmy56666
... [
2013-08-29 22:06:11]
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Re: Off Your Chest
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th August 2013 @ 10:56:29 PM AEST
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Very good write, short and to the point.
Blessings,
emy
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Re: Off Your Chest
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by gypsymaddness on
Thursday, 29th August 2013 @ 11:11:18 PM AEST
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| This poem is straight to the point. Its so true that if you hold anything back that it feels like a weight has fallen on your shoulders. Then, to finally let out whatever you were holding back? Your like weightless. Its a great poem. Love it x) |
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Re: Off Your Chest
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by Banjosandwitch on
Saturday, 31st August 2013 @ 05:31:35 AM AEST
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| good 4 u |
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