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I Wrote To You
Contributed by
scentless_flower
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Tuesday, 10th September 2013 @ 04:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It isn't my fault my love.
I was born with a heart that works like an old camera.
Every time the shutter blinks it takes a black and white image.
There is this side of me my love.
It is a side you never see.
It torturingly drowns me in sorrow, in insecurities and pain.
A tormenting fear of heartache, of wallowing loneliness, of shattered hopes and broken promises.
That is the black in my pictures.
There is this side of me my love.
It is a side i often showed.
It always aches for flowers, for holding hands and fingers intertwined.
A burning desire for passionate kisses, for walking in the rain and jumping childishly in water puddles.
That is the white in my pictures.
And just like that, in black and white, all of the world is now imprinted on my heart.
But you, you don't belong with those.
You've shown me a galaxy of colors full of universes of hope.
And those my love, those simply do not fit in any Polaroid.
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2013-09-10 16:36:30]
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Re: I Wrote To You
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by CharM on
Tuesday, 10th September 2013 @ 06:57:40 PM AEST
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Very nicely written. I can very much relate to this poem. I'm following the same route of "black and white." Must be a girl thing that guys don't necessarily see right away(?). But I'm sure if we give them time, they'll figure it out.... ;-)
*minor typo in the beginning on the 2nd line - take out the "d" and make it say ( like "an" old camera ) |
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Re: I Wrote To You
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by Anu on
Sunday, 15th September 2013 @ 05:08:53 AM AEST
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Totally love it !
Can relate with it ...
I wish people were blessed with a heart and not just mind..
Cheers,
Anu |
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Re: I Wrote To You
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 11:43:00 PM AEST
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stunningly beautiful...................
hugs n' love nessa |
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