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Blind
Contributed by
phall00q
on
Monday, 16th September 2013 @ 12:17:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My eyes saw her
A woman of beauty, loving, and full of warmth
My eyes saw her
A mother showering affection upon her children
My eyes saw her
A wife starving for affection
My eyes saw her
My heart did not
My eyes see her no more
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Re: Blind
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by Skylar on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 11:36:12 PM AEST
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there is nobility in being earnest, even in regret. the test is in learning from past anguishes. and in knowing how to correct long ago mistakes.
for such a short piece, there is an magnitude in its message. well done.
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