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Sunflower and Me
Contributed by
Anu
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Thursday, 19th September 2013 @ 07:46:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have a little sunflower plant,
I water it everyday and watch it grow,
It has a tiny bud about to glow..
I nurture and nourish it well,
For it has to face the world big and mighty,
Even at night when it misses the sunlighty..
I think to myself,
After my little flower blooms & unfolds,
Will it like its life and the tiny little world..?
Today, finally the day has come,
Its shining and smiling at the sun..
Oh, I just love it and No pun !!
I'm glad that this flower will live its life,
Bask in the beautiful sun,
And go back into the mud
When it's time has come..
I'd be left alone,
Waiting for one day ..
To silently go and meet the flower on my way..
Copyright ©
Anu
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2013-09-19 07:46:50]
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Re: Sunflower and Me
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by Kailas on
Thursday, 19th September 2013 @ 06:21:57 PM AEST
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| This is great! I love your rhyme scheme....thanks for sharing :) |
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Re: Sunflower and Me
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by northernlights on
Friday, 20th September 2013 @ 02:49:17 AM AEST
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| There is alot of warmth of life running through your words as though you are taking a moment in time to tell the world a nugget of life wisdom. Effective in its simplicity,and then the expression of finality and inevitability leading to acceptance with dignity in the last line. The warmth of the words make me smile. |
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Re: Sunflower and Me
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by ScribereHabeo on
Sunday, 29th September 2013 @ 06:06:16 PM AEST
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This poem is probably one that every one should
read. Its giving other people a sense of
foreshadowing that will sometimes soften
the blow of loss
Thanks for the read - Z.D
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Re: Sunflower and Me
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th May 2014 @ 07:26:19 PM AEST
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| beautifully penned, hugs n' love nessa |
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