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The Edge of Heaven
Contributed by
kailas
on
Thursday, 19th September 2013 @ 06:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Rosy red petals
the crumbling smell
so sweet
as you run
they get crushed beneath
your feet
the intoxicating scent
brings you back around
to repeat
the wrongs
redemption never found
The dripping of dew
falls upon the dirt
your soul mixed with
desire
a rush that's bound
to hurt
Dreams swirl down the river
while you run towards the ledge
collect a little sliver
before you meet the edge.
~Kaila
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kailas
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2013-09-19 18:16:12]
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Re: The Edge of Heaven
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by saramic on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 10:42:07 AM AEST
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Fragrance and Flagrance- beautifully conveyed - that which is at first sweet has a bitter after taste.
Colours, textures, sensations all blend well - l 'dreams swirl down the river' |
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