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I Remember
Contributed by
Paddycakes
on
Saturday, 28th September 2013 @ 09:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I rememberthose days when I was young,
full of dreams, desire, ambition, and knowing
things will change, yes, things I can change.
I remember my days of youth, happiness,
tears, anxiety and those days of friends
and caring for one another.
I remember those days, days filled with rain
and filled with sunshine, of ambitions, ah
ambitions that were never to be.
I remember my youth, my aging, my thinking
I will live foreverold age was not to be, never
be mine, for youth, life, health was my destiny.
I remember, now, yesI do remember,
I remember growing old, I remember things
that took me unawares
I remember now, I remember my hair turning gray,
my new aches and pains, the failing sight
I remember now, what was then, and what is.
I remember the heartaches, the joy, the excitement
the burning desires, and giving those emotions
yes, they still linger, those days of wine and roses.
I remember, while I can remember, and share those
memories with myself, my conscious mind, and then, those
memories make life worth livingand sharing with myself.
I remember, now, that life and health were never promised
to meI remember that those things I should remember
are gonenever to be remembered.
I remember most of all, that there is a God in heaven
and lastly my thoughts, on that day, that final day
I will remember my God and His promises to me.
I remember my youth...gone forever. I remember
promises kept, promises not kept, but promises
from the Divine, those, now those, I can trust,
those.I remember.
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Paddycakes
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2013-09-28 21:26:02]
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Re: I Remember
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by CharM on
Sunday, 29th September 2013 @ 07:19:57 PM AEST
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| Wow! Very intriguing flow throughout the whole poem! Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: I Remember
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 1st October 2013 @ 10:41:52 AM AEST
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Really liked it, it read well
I feel like I'm to young to feel old yet I work all the time I already miss my youth, I can't imagine what it's like to have decades of life experience it's amazing and things were a lot different then now to
Made me feel better thanks good read
hope to read more soon
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