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Epitome of silence
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Sunday, 6th October 2013 @ 09:35:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i am left with nothing
face to face
with self inflicted oblivion
on the brink teetering
caught in the conundrum of self and wondering
what happened to the man
who spoke in contours and color
now being folded inward,
intricate oragami of a soul becomeing
....silent....
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socialmisfit
... [
2013-10-06 21:35:42]
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Re: Epitome of silence
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by Devilish1 on
Monday, 7th October 2013 @ 12:42:26 AM AEST
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| In so few words the impact was quite profound. I love this. |
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Re: Epitome of silence
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 8th October 2013 @ 07:47:16 AM AEST
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| Dramatic,challenging and effective. |
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Re: Epitome of silence
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by Wordsmith123 on
Tuesday, 8th October 2013 @ 12:00:18 PM AEST
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| The idea of speaking in, "contours and colors," is beautifully descriptive, and the phrase, "intricate oragami," has a wonderful feel in the mouth. Well done. |
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Re: Epitome of silence
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th May 2014 @ 01:33:20 AM AEST
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wow, exquisite and beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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