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Mermaid Wish
Contributed by
rosebush
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Tuesday, 5th November 2013 @ 04:19:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish I were a mermaid
beautiful smart and kind,but I'll teach those sharks a lesson! they keep messin' with my mind
or I'll be like King Trident and take over the sea, everyone will HAVE to listen to me!
I could ride on dolphins and speak dolphinese, I WANT TO BE A MERMAID!
PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE?????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Mermaid Wish
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by Spike on
Saturday, 9th November 2013 @ 04:48:09 PM AEST
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Ha! silly and exuberant, egotistical and beautiful. Plus all those good poetry skills are cleverly underplayed. Dolphinese? all they chatter about is the fish of the day and pod gossip, but they sure can swim. I'll support your nomination though, just on the strength of this little ditty.
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