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broken heart
Contributed by
PlatoX
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Thursday, 7th November 2013 @ 10:58:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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it looked so good from a distance
so i chased her with persistence
acted like i was ready to be locked down knowing i don't want commitment
to pleasure her is the reason for my existence
until i begin to notice her flaws
which make the romantic actions pause
she wants to know the cause
for the sudden plumit in affection like a bad stock
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2013-11-07 10:58:26]
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Re: broken heart
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by euphoema on
Thursday, 7th November 2013 @ 02:55:48 PM AEST
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| I fee that. Short and sweet and straight to the point! I have felt that way and I am sure ladies have felt that way about me...haven't we all! |
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Re: broken heart
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th November 2013 @ 12:19:22 AM AEST
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Well written.
blessings,
emy |
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