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Holding you through the night...
Contributed by
Holderofthestone
on
Friday, 8th November 2013 @ 01:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Awake through out the night
Chasing moments of unconscious release
I lay so close to you
As you run through dreams
Holding your shell in my arms
Yet you couldn't be farther away
As light from digitalized broadcasts
Cast shadows and hues upon you
They remind me through the darkness
Of the perfection that you are
I see you in random flashes
As light comes and goes
And all I receive from you
Is a secure feeling of love
And an occasional turn seeking new comfort,
As the rise and fall of your breathing
Sets the pace like a metronome
To my sleepless night
Just laying here
With all my dreams in my arms...
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Holderofthestone
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2013-11-08 13:58:44]
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Re: Holding you through the night...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th November 2013 @ 11:12:50 PM AEST
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Excellent! Absolutely love the imagery!
Love certainly can inspire great poems and this one ranks up there with the best of them.
Thanks,
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Re: Holding you through the night...
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 12:53:09 AM AEST
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Very touching write. No one can read this and not be touched.
Awesome.
Blessings, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Holding you through the night...
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by JimKoz on
Tuesday, 10th December 2013 @ 02:09:28 AM AEST
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| This is brilliant! |
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