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In the shadows
Contributed by
deathbringer
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Saturday, 9th November 2013 @ 09:31:40 AM in AEST
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it's been too long since I've written anything, and I hope this is a decent enough piece not to be flayed alive(I jest, I jest, seriously though, it's been too long and I hope both my spelling and grammar have improved in this long absence from writing poetry)
In the shadows did it lay
Whispering softly that I may
Find the hubris in my soul.
In the shadows did it whisper
Gently stroking on its whisker
So I may fulfill my role.
In the shadows did it help me
Offered arm that held me gently
And kept at bay the gaping hole.
In the shadows did I stumble
Startled by a distant rumble;
Lost my footing and I fell.
In the shadows did it hit me
Evil scent that cannot be
And found myself a guest in Hell.
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deathbringer
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2013-11-09 09:31:40]
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Re: In the shadows
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by ek_da_poet on
Saturday, 9th November 2013 @ 10:32:10 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this read. It was well structured. Flow and meaning are surperb. Nicely done.
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Re: In the shadows
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 16th November 2013 @ 04:08:33 AM AEST
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| Very interesting poem, soft lulling mood carrying the words that give you hints of the contrasting meaning of the words to the false security of the mood leading you to a powerful destination. Effective writing. |
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Re: In the shadows
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 30th April 2014 @ 12:49:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful! hugs n' love nessa |
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