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Where are you
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I saw you,
standing there staring at me,
i thought you were no one,
nothing that was important,
but you came closer,
and got more important,
i started seeing things in a different way,
more like seeing you in a different way,
you were there for me in the beginning,
and in the end,
this is a time i need you now,
Why arent you here now?
why were you there then?
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2003-05-17 16:05:00]
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Re: Where are you
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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| this is very good, to me i see such flow of movement and time, i can almost picture it all in my mind, |
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Re: Where are you
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:40:41 AM AEST
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Time & distance sometimes gives you a better perspective.
I liked this one quite a bit :)
~T |
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