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Waiting for the best day ever...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Sunday, 17th November 2013 @ 03:29:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Standing here hand in hand
Looking deep into your eyes
Trying not to break down
Trying hard not to cry
You have your hair pulled back
A glow upon your face
Im held here in a trance
By your angelic grace
You wear such a lovely dress
I cant seem find the words to say
To tell you youre so beautiful
And how Youve taken my breath away
Holding on to one hand
Gazing upon my lover
Standing here with my best friend
She'll be holding onto the other
You look up at me so happily
With tears forming in your eyes
I know weve both been waiting
For this moment all our lives
As we recite our vows
I'm trying so hard all the while
Staring deep into your eyes...
Oh how I love to see you smile
Our friends there watching us
Will make us both so proud
As I pronounce you man and wife
Will finally be spoken aloud!
For years wed both been waiting
Anxious just for this
As we both lean in
To share in our first kiss
As Mr. and Mrs. Dodgen
Now as husband and wife
Thus begins a new day
To the rest of our life
There will be tears, hugs and handshakes
From the family present there
With us on our special day
There with us to share
And as we both promise our lives
And swear to each other forever
I wouldnt change a thing
In this, the best day ever
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2013-11-17 15:29:00]
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Re: Waiting for the best day ever...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 04:56:54 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and many blessings to you and yours.
huggs,
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Re: Waiting for the best day ever...
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by speedy on
Friday, 22nd November 2013 @ 04:46:00 PM AEST
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I like your take on it - it almost reads like song lyrics. It's very intuitive & insightful - good write.
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