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the fight
Contributed by
speedy
on
Thursday, 21st November 2013 @ 06:29:12 PM in AEST
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Rain falls down
Across the land
Just like mist
Upon my hand
Sun comes up
From deep inside
Just like joy
With no place to hide
Clouds will form
Upon the sky
Just like sorrow
When you cry
You wake up
Late in the night
Just like an owl
Taking to flight
You feel peace
Your friend are near
Just like a child
When feeling fear.
Somewhere inside
There is a lift
From deep inside
You have a gift.
Inside your soul,
There's so much light.
You can do it
You'll win the fight.
Just keep on going
You have a friend
Who will support you
Until the very end.
Copyright ©
speedy
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2013-11-21 18:29:12]
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Re: the fight
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 07:30:37 PM AEST
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Wow u r diffidently strutting your talent in this awesome write.
Strut on.
big huggs, smiles blessing,
emy+
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Re: the fight
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 09:31:36 PM AEST
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great style and flow, a joy to read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: the fight
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 05:08:59 AM AEST
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Great write. and I love the last few stanzas of hope.
It is nice when we have those moments of encouragement |
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Re: the fight
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 03:58:21 PM AEST
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An excellent mix and nature and inspiration. Call it naturation.
Fox |
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Re: the fight
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 31st October 2020 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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Simply awesome.
I get it. Let/'/s pretend together.
We/'/ll be actors and pretend......
You need not pretend....this was fantastic.
You/'/re just humble.
God Bless....
Jim |
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