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freedom
Contributed by
speedy
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Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 07:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I feel so free;
I learned to fly.
Too bright to see;
I don't know why.
I'm floating right
Above the lands;
Like having wings
Instead of hands.
I think you know
Why I feel free.
I'm not hiding
Inside of me.
I have a voice -
You know it's true;
I made my choice:
To be with you.
Copyright ©
speedy
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2013-11-23 07:31:11]
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Re: freedom
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 02:30:41 PM AEST
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Hello Speedy
Yes we all experience that some time or other in our live's. I like to think of it temporary insanity. Cause in to days life it is insane to think things last for ever especially love. People of today base love on the physical and monetary value of a person, not like we do that believe love is a gift that is priceless. Great write. Blessings
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Re: freedom
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 08:10:19 PM AEST
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reading this made me smile, truly. Is there a true love, a true love with more than a self-styled stoic loyalty, a conviction as solid as gold? Oh you bet ya, this clearly states, and poetically rhyming at that!
Excellent write!
Thank you!
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Re: freedom
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by thistle_and_fern on
Friday, 13th December 2013 @ 03:16:13 AM AEST
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Loved the sentiment of being free of feeling free and no longer hiding yourself
Lovely
Thank you for sharing |
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Re: freedom
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 09:06:35 PM AEST
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beautiful, hugs n' love nessa
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