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First Frost
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 06:56:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Up in smoke
Poof
A puff
Of deep air
It's cold outside
Flakes fall
Crisp chill
A hot cup of coffee
Warms me to my bones
Watch me dance
Here alone
Surrounded by people
Unknown
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2013-11-23 18:56:27]
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Re: First Frost
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 07:53:40 PM AEST
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I really liked this one, the dancing part
Thanks!
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Re: First Frost
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by Spike on
Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 05:08:22 AM AEST
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I liked this one - it has a nice feel to it, with seasonal sensibilities and existential observations nicely wrapped in sparse descriptors.
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Re: First Frost
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Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 10:09:07 PM AEST
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| Very good!! |
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Re: First Frost
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 26th November 2013 @ 03:38:35 AM AEST
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| Dancing alone in a room full of people is one of the best feelings sometimes. :) |
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