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Conflicted
Contributed by
speedy
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Thursday, 28th November 2013 @ 07:19:15 PM in AEST
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So very sad
But cannot cry;
Just freaking out
But don't know why.
I thought I was
Strong enough to face
A gathering storm
Through time & space.
It makes no sense
To feel this way;
I'm so conflicted,
It's here to stay.
A real strong block
So deep inside;
It blocks emotion -
It's here I hide.
So big, so thick
Don't want to see;
I feel so crowded -
Need to be free.
Copyright ©
speedy
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2013-11-28 19:19:15]
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Re: Conflicted
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th November 2013 @ 02:21:34 AM AEST
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Well, I hope it gets better. Resulted in a good poem, though. Flows very very well.
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Re: Conflicted
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st December 2013 @ 12:45:40 AM AEST
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yes this flows well, fog, or is it dilemma; the writer suggests both, alongside both pain and anguish,
and a tepid foreboding...
a perceived misguided belief in ones own self.
Fog, conflict, depression...
The conflict is who you perceive you are or are not? The fog is, you don't see your art shows it while you're making it. The depression is a release - what you wrote.
I like this a lot, and I probably don't have a clue what the hell I'm talking about here... I can say easily I feel similar feelings, but luckily do not have clinical depression, and that such a thing is no joke.
Sorry for coming off as a prude if it sounds that way I mean. Your a good writer man! Hope all is well! Your writing is good for others too, don't forget that much.
Peace!
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Re: Conflicted
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2013 @ 01:03:10 AM AEST
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I feel you on this one
like the way it flows...... |
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Re: Conflicted
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 02:28:58 PM AEST
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beautifully written, excellent expression and great flow, blessings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Conflicted
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 28th July 2015 @ 03:57:23 PM AEST
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Feeling overwhelmed is never a good thing.
Just slay those dragons one at a time, and keep your chin up.
Good write. Thanks for sharing.
~Scorp |
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