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Breathing
Contributed by
regret_nothing
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Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ThankYouPoems
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barely clinging on
to a life i want to end
fighting for a smile
losing to a tear
feelings ripped apart
heart shredded
wrists cut like ribbon
losing blood
losing faith
everything else was lost that day
i want to thank you for your lies
that kept me breathing
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2003-05-18 02:05:00]
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Re: Breathing
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 05:51:59 AM AEST
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| this is great - short and simply written but with true depth of emotion and some effective imagery. welcome to the site, hope to read more of your work soon, Kate x |
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Re: Breathing
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:49:52 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc. This is an intense write. Suicide isn't the answer. Stay with us here and keep writing. I wish you happiness as you deserve.
Michelle |
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