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Poison
Contributed by
satanssecret1369
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Monday, 23rd December 2013 @ 07:36:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My fleeting heart is poisoned
The infection yet to spread
I can feel it deep inside me
Seeping toxins to my head
My pulse has lost its rhythm
As your words create new beats
Some of pain and some of passion
To cool the weary summer heat
Youve brought me here for nothing
Im just a toy; its all a game
My heart still bloodied badly
From a vicious love roulette
These melodies I write you
You know nothing but the words
Youll never hear the blissful song
Nor come to understand the hurt
I can reach every peak in sight
I can topple mountain tops
But this never-ending pain
I cant seem to make it stop
When you came into my life
I was lonely; you were there
Time has torn us both apart
But still, I know you care
The water drowns the flame
But you see, Im airy like a child
And though earth is your support
Im the one that drives you wild
So even when its you and her
Ive no doubt I cross your mind
Like the poison in my own still heart
Im creeping up inside
Still, while Ive nothing left
I find ways to bide my time
Face the fact that its all over
But Ill wait my whole damn life
If nothing else, youll always be
The only one Ill ever need
So when the world has worn you thin
When the winds of fortune blow you out
Ill be waiting in this fortress
Of inadequate self-doubt
My path is paved with hues of blue
Until this road leads me to you
And in the darkness of the night
Ill let this poison reign inside
Until I know Ive reached the end
Where hopefully, Ill have my friend
And my fleeting heart will yearn
Even if the flame has ceased to burn
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Re: Poison
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by NikaShortyyCakeFolsom on
Monday, 23rd December 2013 @ 10:47:29 AM AEST
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This is beautiful...I can relate to what your saying. Love is undoubtedly like a poison and it takes over almost like a disease. I really like this writting and I will be looking forward to reading more from you.
Warmest wishes,
Nika
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Re: Poison
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by Amicus on
Monday, 23rd December 2013 @ 12:45:32 PM AEST
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Hello,
The ideals of your poem are universal, love lost and the desire for what has been. I particularly enjoyed this stanza:
So when the world has worn you thin
When the winds of fortune blow you out
I’ll be waiting in this fortress
Of inadequate self-doubt
The desire to wait even though you know it will never be, and the doubt that comes with it.
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Re: Poison
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 26th December 2013 @ 04:12:27 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. sadly i can relate to it in many ways. |
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