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Letting go
Contributed by
essential
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Wednesday, 25th December 2013 @ 05:20:01 PM in AEST
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I could not count how many times
The clock ticked since I saw you
Maybe it was yesterday,
Or has it been a year?
I saw so many signs
And similarities to draw your
Countenance in the display
Of my surrounding sphere.
I hope but do not think
That my face lives in your mind
That there are times when you feel whole
And sleepless hours pass at night
I grasp that endless link
That's not able to bind
Its loose end to your soul
If I hold it so tight.
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Re: Letting go
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by softerware on
Thursday, 26th December 2013 @ 09:09:22 PM AEST
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I love the last 4 lines…reminds me of sand..the tighter we hold it, the more it slips through our fingers.
Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Letting go
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by potentialpoet96 on
Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 09:50:46 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this piece. I could feel the emotions. |
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