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word banging
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 06:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the fabric
is paper thin
it's trees
dissolved
shadows of old
cherished forests
letters
as abstractions
an un-poem
beating.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2013-12-31 18:13:05]
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Re: word banging
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 09:16:54 PM AEST
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I found myself asking a question when I read this and that, to me, is poetry in action. Does the beating heart of the un-poem beating be creation about to happen? Thus creating a life of its own...
Thank you and the usual pleasantries to you (kinda sorta neighbor) .  |
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Re: word banging
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 09:48:26 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking and subtle. Nice. |
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Re: word banging
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by saramic on
Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 08:13:42 AM AEST
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very cleverly done - the way the poem lets images surface and submerge....the un-poem
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Re: word banging
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 4th January 2014 @ 06:10:53 AM AEST
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| An unpoem beating.....the beauty is in the simplicity and yet complete connection of understanding and not having a single worry of the effectiveness of the writing.All of this for me is a joy filled pleasure. |
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Re: word banging
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 12:01:53 AM AEST
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refreshingly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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